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hiro
12-17-2007, 08:42 AM
I think the Project is near the End.
Do you see something to change?

Best Hiro.

http://www.digitalshapes.de/showroom/L-ext.jpg

alpha
12-17-2007, 08:53 AM
Hi Hiro,

the glass facade looks quite 'dead' - the reflections of the environment/sky are too 'thin' and hence not convincing. Reflections on glass surfaces are always a bit bumpy.
Apart from that, quite nice !

Regards
-alpha-

STRAT
12-17-2007, 09:02 AM
what did you do about your AA problems in the end mate?

Prowler
12-17-2007, 09:08 AM
The woman seems to be to large - compared to the man and the perspective difference.

hiro
12-17-2007, 09:22 AM
Strat,
first , i rendere the final image very big! then, you can see, the problem wasnt so big as it appears in the screenshots!
For AA i used first adaptive dms min 4 max 16 with box filter. (tipp from stefan)
than i changed to min 1 max 16, and the result is good.

at the bginning i was very afraid of having a problem with the louvres, but at the end, this wasnt such a big thing!

powler, alpha,: thanks, your hints are right, im gonna check this, thanks!

choppir
12-17-2007, 10:21 AM
hiro, it looks nice mate.

I would just work a bit on the grass for instance. Maybe give it some displacement?

Something with that car. Very dark.
I like the building material. Looks good.

The woman is floating! :shock: :lol:

Cheers

choppir

maya69
12-17-2007, 05:47 PM
good beginning

correct your expo is over expo

may be ajust your color mapping

for grass you add with region render in sceond render ( i hope proxy is avaible very soon).

best regard

ZuluQ
12-17-2007, 05:58 PM
In addition to all the coments, i think theres something with the trees, all looks the same, u can change the scale in one, the rotation in another, the color of the leaf, put some other type of tree, etc. :wink:

daantjuh44
12-17-2007, 08:04 PM
looking good !

as for changing the trees i wouldnt do it
if you make them all different i thuink it might drag your attention away from the building wich in this case would be a bad thing (just my opinion)

Daan

ZuluQ
12-17-2007, 08:21 PM
as for changing the trees i wouldnt do it
if you make them all different i thuink it might drag your attention away from the building wich in this case would be a bad thing (just my opinion)

Yes, its a matter of opinion, i think this trees looks less realistic cause all of them looks the same. If u do it the right way they dont have to drag ur attention from the building, imho. :wink:

LoneRanger
01-11-2008, 05:16 PM
Well I dont care what the rest say, I like it!! Dark path on the ground (left) bothers me a bit, but thats my HO. Mind sharing some camera and vray settings with us?

glass.use
01-11-2008, 06:27 PM
great job, the aa looks fantastic. waiting for the end 8)

stefan
01-13-2008, 06:20 PM
great hiro:-)
glad i could help a bit;-)
cheers
stefan

hiro
01-13-2008, 06:26 PM
great hiro:-)
glad i could help a bit;-)
cheers
stefan

thanks stefan!

your joking, "could help a bit.." without your great support here on the foum, we all have not the reached that level!

thanks for your engangement!