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btown
02-12-2008, 05:50 PM
I need a fresh pair of eyes on some renders I did. Any comments? Please critique... Thanks!

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2909/condosfrontqw3.jpg

I just can't get the night shot to look like I want :( Any suggestions?

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/7420/condospoolih3.jpg

Walli
02-12-2008, 07:36 PM
I think the grass looks a little bit blueish. I also would use a different sun angle (if possible, don“t know if you have to match real world light direction).

machmirdenlukas
02-12-2008, 10:17 PM
nice start!

try to get a pov of prox. the height of a standing person in front of that building looking at it to avoid inconsistent y-axis.

the night-scene ist way to bright. the light of the rooms would be enough to get a cool mood.

i would add some abstract people,..

nice project!
cheerz m

titane357
02-13-2008, 08:14 PM
check your lights : look like shadows are off.