Baby Room

[Sauron]

Baby Room

http://3dsauron.googlepages.com/Baby--Room.jpg

Hi, this is Room for baby. kave been designed for a time ago and I had re-rendering it. working time 2:15 hour ..
comments are most welcome. :)
Ithanks,hope you enjoy it ..

[Jurassic]

Sorry, but almost everything is bad

[Neil V]

I'm afraid I have to agree with Jurassic.

Firstly, is the chair in the middle of the scene floating? It looks like it is. The pillow looks like a pasta parcel or some kind of pie you would put in the oven. Shouldn't there be a light hanging from the ceiling? The wallpaper texture needs work because it isn't wrapping corrrectly in the corner. The window needs a blind or curtains as well as something going on outside the window rather than just plain white. Color mapping needs adjusting to prevent those dark areas throughout most of the scene. And the wood texture on the floor needs working on too. Finally, thee window frame looks odd. Why does it have that strange frame in the centre? Is there any glass?

[Studiolex]

Maybe I don not fully understand, but why is this a room for a bay? Why does a baby need a secretaire and a couch? Why a couch with a steel grill? What about the bed without bars or balusters to prevent the baby to fall out of it? And I miss some light fixtures...

Lex

[Nico]

I'm agree with all off you and there's something very bad for an image is the ceiling so low.

i don't understand the window...


Cheers,
Nicolas