LAtest Test "need suggestions"

[glass.use]

approx. 2 hours and 20min on very high preset

any comments? it looks weird i don't know why, im going to tweak it but need some suggestions

http://www.j1jj.com/uploads/3d0b9dc35c.jpg


anything wrong? i just feel the lighting is not ok! :(
the only 2 i noticed is that i forgot to put displacement on carpet O.o
and the glass mat on the right have reflect of boxes?! dunno from where it came and with large pixeling

ANYWAY. Im going to post a night shot tomorrow hopefully

tank you all :oops:

[ak-vision]

hi glass.use

weird? i cant find anything weird...
It looks great in my opinion and the light is fantastic.
Perhaps one thing i could complain about is the wood texture on the right: it is a little too big, i think. But that is, in germany we say, Korinthenkackerei... :)

cu
Andre

[Fluffy]

I think what you don't like is the "laboratory light" that the neon lights generate.
You probably need a bit more contrast by leaving only the sun light as your source of illumination - or reduce the spread of these neon lights so only part of the scene is lit by some of them (once again, to enhance contrast).
Other than that, I'm not too fond of the wood texture on the table and chairs, but it's only a matter of taste (the panel of wood on the right doesn't look too big to me).

Nice render anyway!

[marshalartist]

Looks fantastic, the only thing I don't like is the orientation of the wood grain on the table legs and frame. :D

[stefan]

cool glass use!,

i would probably trying making the artificial light less strong, and adjust overall lightness by iso. so that it is not so equal both.

but great image, specially for beeing so new to vray:-)
good mood!

cheers
stefan

[vesale]

hi, you should invert the direction of your mapping on the table,
the wood lines should go along the longer parts (rotate the texturesmap coordinates)

tweak a bit the specs of the oranges, turn a bit the pots, and most of all, the thing that disturb me the most, is that our eyes expect a bit more light coming from that huge window, while the overexposed pattern made by the neon go in another direction, maybe balancing the ligths will do, but one could expect the exterior to be a little less white to let the sun light coming from the left be more proeminente whilst the neon could be soften...

last thing, the camera angle could dive a bit to soften the straight line cutting your compo, it'll rise the back of the chairs a bit (visually)

i didnt mention the woodtexture on the right but maybe its a little big, that kindof pieces of wood are generally around 40cm wide for 2 to 4 meters long


my two cent... still great anyway :D

[St Cana's]

glass

Why can I never see any of your images in the treads?

Cheers
Karl

[Cian]

I cant see it either.
I have no problem with others.

Cian.

[Fluffy]

I guess he deleted pretty much everything he posted. A shame, really, such nice images.

[glass.use]

I didnt delete any thing Fluffy! its the limitation of webhosting images.
but i still have all my works and images.
sorry i don't have a server. i will try to re upload.

sorry again :oops:

[Tong]

at imageshack.us images stays a long time (mine first - 3 years already )

[St Cana's]

You seem to ignite some interesting threads so it would be good to be able to see your work.

Cheers
Karl