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lzooml
11-05-2007, 04:00 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs21/f/2007/309/4/8/Pure_by_lzooml.jpg

Render time about 15 minute

Nico
11-05-2007, 04:18 PM
Hi,

Lighning is good, but the render as some artefacts. And you have a problem with your background, it doens'nt make the scene real. Except this, the picture is nice. Maybe the chrome of the lamp need more work, because right now it is too flat.

Tong
11-05-2007, 04:45 PM
window overbrighten

prayas
11-05-2007, 04:54 PM
Hi there.

The angle of your background image is wrong. That is what makes it look unnatural. One other thing is the floating blancket on the left.
It's a bit bright but thats the same thing i experienced with the first renders using an actual sun in Vray.

Nice image all the way if you work out the little things pointed out in the comments.

P..:

lzooml
11-05-2007, 09:33 PM
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs19/f/2007/309/0/c/Pure_by_lzooml.jpg

Nico
11-06-2007, 06:45 AM
Do you have change something except the white in orange?

lzooml
11-10-2007, 11:51 AM
No

pilgonico
11-10-2007, 01:48 PM
HELLO lZOOML

Do you mind pls to send me the chair model?
I have been looking for it quit a while.

thanx man

ak-vision
11-10-2007, 06:42 PM
hi,

the room looks really good and the light is nice.
The only thing thats wrong is that the perspective of the room doesn´t fit to the perspective of the background outside. The height of the horizon doesn´t work with the height of the camera.

regards
Andre