Office Interior Test

[marshalartist]

http://www.marshalstudios.com/temp/OfficeBuildingSR1.jpg
All crits welcome

[glass.use]

nice one marshalartist, just the background seems faded. increase the contrast of it :wink:

[STRAT]

Hi Pete! yeah, nicey :) i'd just tone down the red saturation a smidgen, and get rid of the blue colour to the glass tables.

unfortunately, i dont think this image works at this res because there's soooooooo much shinanigans going on in the midriff of the scene with all that furniture making to way too busy and cluttered to figure out whats happening.

[Tong]

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3553/officebuildingsr11de8.jpg

:wink:

[marshalartist]

http://www.marshalstudios.com/temp/OfficeBuildingR2.jpg
Thanks All, here are some changes.
Tong I do not know what you mean by 'Light' and 'No Light'

[Tong]

i mean background image dark (without sun, but room full of light)

now it ok..... with background . :lol:

[rhodesy]

Smaller image please! can't please everyone eh :wink: too much scrolling on my 19inch work monitor!! Im not convinced by the DOF I find it harder to relate to the scale of the scene and it looks a bit more like a model. And should the focus not be on the beautiful space rather than the back of a chair? So i prefered the first one - perhaps just vary the chairs and laptops on the tables. I like the light explosion at the end it draws the eye in - did you add extra lights in for that or is that just physical sun behaviour? Nice image - and re the colour of the chair thast hard to comment on as im sure it looks different on everyones monitor!

Nice image/scene :D

[marshalartist]

http://www.marshalstudios.com/temp/OfficeInteriorSR3.jpg

[nycL45]

M-u-c-h better. Your gotta feel good about this. One comment made earlier that distracts me is the mottling on the ceiling. What is causing that?

Nice.

[rhodesy]

Slight glossy reflection of the tables is my guess. Yes deff the best image of the three :D

[ZuluQ]

Really nice work, but honestly the red couch is getting all the attention in the composition of the shot, and i think that maybe if u try another angle u can get a better results. :wink:

[marshalartist]

Thanks I will try a different angle and change the ceiling

[choppir]

Image looks much much better!

I would maybe just change the wood colour. Very mustardy...
Yeah, something on the ceiling is funny.

You doin well mate. Go 4 it!

[marshalartist]

http://www.marshalstudios.com/temp/OfficeInteriorMR4.jpg
I think this is better?

[ZuluQ]

Much better indeed! I like it :wink: